01 November 2017

Why Didn't I Realize This Sooner?

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I'm somehow equally secure and insecure about the same thing lately. Well, I figured something out, which is great. Fantastic. Wonderful. It's just...it's something I could have, should have realized a long time ago. So while I'm glad I'm starting to figure things out about my book, I'm still left shaking my first and screaming "WHY DIDN'T I REALIZE THIS SOONER???"

Ahem. So last week I (vaguely) talked about having a bit of an epiphany about the last third of my book, which I've been trying forever to figure out and rewrite. Basically I realized Jordan (the MC of my WIP for those of you who are new here) wasn't acting like himself and that it was making the story weaker. If he stayed truer to his character, it would make more sense going forward and I could eventually bring the book to its conclusion without losing tension (I hope).

Well, I'm still figuring out more things that I should have already figured out. I've talked before about a "twist" that happens at the end of Chapter 17. Well, it'll probably be Chapter 18 now because my editing has added a chapter, but that's not the point. I've always been a bit psychotic about how much I love this twist. I wouldn't say it's a complete plot twist, it's more that one character does something you wouldn't expect, the other character is basically smacked in the face by it, and things get all messed up for a chapter or two before getting resolved.

I love, love, love this moment when it happens. It's intense. It's kind of heartbreaking. But what I did afterward always worried me. I kind of smoothed things over really quickly. In the next chapter, actually. Basically the character who did the bad thing explains why he did it and my characters more or less make up and everything's back to normal. I've always worried that I kind of made that awesome twist irrelevant by sweeping it under the rug.

OR DID I??? (DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN.)

Well, this is what I'm realizing. In relation to my last post, this is basically the moment in the story where Jordan realizes he's letting his emotions get the better of him. He basically makes a big emotion-based decision, tries to act on it, and gets blindsided by the results. I wouldn't say he gets heartbroken, but close. SO. This is the point where he decides he's never going to let his emotions dictate his actions again, because the one time he does it backfires on him.

So this thought process will continue throughout the rest of the book! So while he does make up with the other character and things seemingly go back to normal, underneath, he has completely changed because of the twist moment.

You're probably thinking, that's great, Sarah, why would you be insecure when you're finally figuring the end of your book out? Because I could have figured it out sooner! All the puzzle pieces were there, staring me in the face, and I just couldn't put them together. Oh well. What can you do? Just keep writing, I suppose.

Have you ever realized something about a WIP that you should have realized sooner? 

18 comments:

  1. Don't let your characters off the hook too easily. As soon as something bad happens to one of mine, I want to resolve it right away. Let them suffer. Your readers will thank you for it.

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  2. Don't beat yourself out about not figuring out things sooner. It takes time to learn as a writer and some things we can't see without the help of critique partners. Do agree with Ken's general advice too.

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  3. I think you're being too hard on yourself. Inspiration strikes when it's good and ready. And the important thing is that you've figured it out and that you're so excited about it.

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  4. That's definitely happened to me.
    Just keep writing. You have it figured out now! That's a good thing. :)

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  5. Better to figure it out late than not at all!

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  6. Yeah, I'm constantly the last person to figure things out about my stories. My beta readers or critique partners will say something, and it's like, "Holy crap. Why didn't I see that sooner?" It happens to us all, I think.

    And I also agree with Ken. :)

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  7. Keep the epiphanies coming! Then one day all will be finished and you can write The End with confidence. Good luck.

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  8. I think with every revisit to one's work we can find things we didn't think of before and ways the story could be changed.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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  9. Carrying that twist's outcome out through the rest of the book is a good idea. I read many books (mostly from clients) where a conflict is patched up too quickly, mostly likely in the next chapter, as you said. Sounds like you're noticing a lot in your story now, which is good. Keep it up!

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  10. Happens to me all the time! You know you are at the mercy of the words and they didn't want you to know all the things yet, that's all! :)

    Good for you. Now...get back to work!

    Heather

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  11. Yeah happens or figure something out to have something change that makes it not work, lol. Happy Writing. Juneta @ Writer's Gambit

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  12. I do that quite a bit actually. Everything will be there, but I don't realize how important and life-changing it is until much later in revisions. It's nice when it works out, though.

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  13. It takes time sometimes to get our characters to let us realize how the story really needs to go. So, when are we going to get to buy this book now that you have it figured out? >8D

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  14. I had to learn not to smooth things over so easily either, it just hurts to hurt my characters, though!

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  15. Hooray for figuring it out. Congratulations!

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  16. I've just found out something which means one of my book's plot points simply can't happen. I could easily have researched that and found out sooner. It's not a huge deal as I've not written any of that part yet, but it does mean I need to do some more planning.

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  17. I think it's awesome that things are falling together. WOOT!

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