07 June 2013

Do You Need an Antagonist?

I’ve been overthinking things lately, and it’s sending me into a literary panic attack. I can’t figure out who or what the antagonist is in my WIP. I’ve been fluctuating between thoughts of “pssh, I don’t need no stinkin’ antagonist,” and “well, doesn’t every story have one?” Not to mention thoughts that there has to be one in there. But I can’t figure it out. Well, I’ve got my protagonist, of course—that much is clear. His love interest certainly doesn’t feel like an opposing force, at least once I get past the “we are absolutely not getting together” phase. His mom? Well, she’s not around enough and when she is, certainly doesn’t care enough to be disrupting things. Is my antagonist even a person? Is there something hiding beneath the surface that I’m not seeing? But wait! My protagonist is really an antihero at best—does that make him his own antagonist? Is that possible?

See the panic? But my crazy thoughts have got me thinking on a broader scale. Does every story have an antagonist? Do you always need one?

Some people automatically assume that an antagonist is a villain. While this certainly can be the case, it isn’t always true. A villain is usually obvious—some mustache twirling fiend bent on world domination. A bad guy. Usually the hero is trying to stop him. I’ve certainly written villains before—my fantasy stories always had one. But not every story needs a villain. And an antagonist isn’t always going to be one. An antagonist is defined as someone being opposed or struggling against an opponent. This doesn’t necessarily make them evil. Say you’re writing about a student running for class president, and they have an opponent. That person is an antagonist—they want the same thing the protagonist does and only one of them can get it. Now, if that other student resorts to sabotaging the campaign of the other in order to win, that makes them a villain.

So, ok, my story doesn’t have a villain. Not every story needs one. Well, what if your protagonist isn’t exactly a hero? Roles can be reversed. Sometimes the protagonist can be the villain, and the antagonist is the person trying to stop them. Who you’re rooting for depends on how the author spins it. Just because someone is the main character doesn’t mean they have to be perfect and morally upstanding. Take Macbeth, for example. Obviously Macbeth is the main character in the play, but he certainly isn’t perfect. He commits murder to become king, and continues to have people killed in order to stay in power. Sometimes having a good guy be the main character isn’t always the way to go. What if the student in our election story is a good person, but decides that she can’t win and has to destroy the reputation of her opponent? It can be more interesting to watch a hero descend into wrongdoing than just despair at something bad happening to them.

So yes, I think my protagonist is an antihero. He purposely corrupts someone else in order to gain things for himself. But I still don’t know who my antagonist is. I guess I’ve created a situation where both main characters can be seen as a victim depending on how you look at it. But there’s no opposing force that’s clear to me. I’ve read things about how your antagonist doesn’t even need to be a person. Is society my antagonist? Well, maybe a bit. I’d feel stronger about this if my characters were desperately in love and the legality related to their age difference was the only thing keeping them apart. But that’s not the story I’m writing. So then is my protagonist battling himself? Is there an aspect of himself that is actually the antagonist? Well, that doesn’t seem to fit, either. He’s not struggling with his sexuality, and he doesn’t feel guilty about manipulating other people. He’s only concerned with getting what he wants.

Have I totally screwed things up by not having an antagonist? Or is there one there that I’m just not seeing? I feel like every character has a little evil in them, but that doesn’t necessarily make them a villain. It just makes them human. I’ll probably be pondering my antagonist (or lack thereof) until I figure it out, or decide I don’t need one.

6 comments:

  1. "But wait! My protagonist is really an antihero at best—does that make him his own antagonist?" - That's an interesting point and although may not be true for your story, it sounds like it would make for an interesting one.

    What a baffling question though, do you need an antagonist? I'm not sure, I once read a story that was based around one whole day and there wasn't really an antagonist. I mean, in reality, are there always antagonists? Do I have an antagonist? Do you?
    We probably do but like you said, not the mustache twirling kind.

    I have a 70k novel that I'm going to go back to one day but one of things pointed out was that the only possible human villain sat in the background and that, for the most part, my MC's city was the antagonist.
    I don't think you need one. Reading about what people would do with no barriers is always interesting!

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    1. I agree--even though I might have one hidden under the surface, it isn't obvious. I could think of several ways to fit in a real antagonist, but that's not the story I want to write.

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  2. I don't think my latest has an antagonist either, unless you can count the mental voice inside of her head that keeps her from doing things. Does that count? Great post. I have to think about this one.

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    1. It probably does count! I don't think an antagonist has to be obvious.

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  3. Is the protagonist his own antagonist? Great device if there is a duality of thought and intent in his mind; a sociopath scenario. The protagonist needs to overcome, transcend something to want the reader to do their job, read. Think of people telling you a story of their life, some add the drama, "and I realized the keys were locked in the car and the two heads I were delivering to the hospital would totally thaw if I didn't get them there by noon..." and others more ramble on like an aimless travelogue, "And I eat there and it was yum, then we walked there and saw a bunny, overall, a good day." (Yawn)Drama is not only the spice of life but the spice of writing.

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    1. Well, my protagonist is a bit of a sociopath, so maybe. Nobody wants to read about someone's everyday life; they already have to live it. That's why I think it's fun for the main character to have a little evil in them.

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